Wednesday, October 17, 2012

In the Boat Alone!! (Narrative)


It was a bright and sunny day in Tahiti when my family and I decided to relax in our mini-boat. We were having loads of fun until something strange and weird happened.......................

My whole family turned into ghosts and I was all ALONE! I started freaking out, “OH NO! What am I going to do?” I cried out loud. I kept thinking about my beloved family which I missed already.

Sooner or later, I suddenly ended up in a Shark’s mouth being flushed by the flood (the flood was from all the water inside it’s mouth.)

“WHEW!!” I said as I got up out of a strange dream.

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