Sudden Comings!! (The Car Stopped, Why?)

Our writing task was to make a story with only 100 words about a car Suddenly Stopping and why.

With Mum waiting in the car, I rushed out the door feeling unprepared for school. Inside the airy car I climbed, shut! We were ready to go. Driving up the high driveway and out onto the narrow road we went, the car suddenly stopped. Why? A big crowd of people were surrounding two cars which had abruptly slammed together. The car owners were tossed out of the car and badly hurt by the hard cold concrete. Afterwards,  the cops and ambulances came to check them out. Both cars were badly damaged. A few days later, the victims were back home.