Wednesday, April 3, 2013

"Marlin and Dory!" Speech Marks!

Marlin sat on a smooth rock feeling depressed. Gazing down into the dark and horrifying deep sea,  Dory confidently swam towards Marlin “Hey Mr Grumpy Gills. When life gets you down, you know what you gotta do?” She  asked him with an expressively happy voice. “I don’t want to know what you gotta do!” Marlin replied carelessly.  “Just keep swimming, just keep swimming,  just keep swimming, swimming, swimming. What do we do? We swim swim!”  Dory joyfully sang while he dragged Marlyn deeper into the sea. Deeper and deeper they went, the more angry Marlin got. “Dory, No singing.” Dory didn’t care as she ignored Marlin’s words.  “I love to swim. When you want to swim.” Her annoying and repeatedly song distracted Marlin, he has had enough of it, “See I'm gonna get stuck now with that song now it’s in my head!!” He angrily shouted. “Sorry.” Dory apologized.

(We are learning to put speech marks into paragraphs. For this task, we used this video of Marlin and Dory off "Finding Nemo" as an example for our speeches. Feel free to watch the video above and and leave a comment.)


Zion T said...

Hey Hosannah
Nice story and good detail. Keep up the good work, and keep posting those good posts.

Elizabeth C said...

Hey Hosannah,
What a great story you have.
And I like the interesting Sentences.
Keep up the good work Hosannah.

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